This is my olive tree flyer.
If you can't see a word, tell me............
It's a little(?) dirty.....
I tried to erase them, but the paper was not strong enough. (It almost torn........) Sorry......................................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome. I love the drawings! You are very talented.
A few notes.
One, next time, do the assignment in pencil first so that I can correct your grammar.
You should change the subheading to: "We will catch your money so it does not escape."
Change the last "do you want to be...?" to "Do you want your house to be beautiful?"
Information should not have an "s" at the end in either instance.
Put "for" in front of "much more".
The flyer seems to be missing a lot of information from your persuasive argument organizer. It is okay. But generally, you should use the information that you write in your organizer for the final draft.
Good job!
Carrie