Multi-Media Writing Festival, EnglishAloud
First and Family Name, Age (American), Location where the candidate lives, Festival Year: "Titel"
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First I went to my grandparents’ house to pick them up and
then we went to the Phoenix Water Park.
The car ride made me tired, but I was excited to go to the park. We went to the hotel to rest. I was happy because
the TV was very big, but was disappointed because there weren’t many channels
to watch. I went to sleep. The next day we went to the water park.
When I first got to the water park, many people were there.
I didn’t know which way I had to go, so I was confused. I went to the waterslide to ride it, but when
I got there, there was a very long line to wait. I had to wait one hour, but
finally I was able to go on the slide. The
scariest part was when I came off the waterslide. I am not heavy, so when I was going fast I
flew in the air. I thought I was going to die, but luckily I survived.
My trip to the water park was my favorite trip I have
taken. I want to go to that water park
again and I will tell people to go there because the hotel service is good and
the water park is fun. I have good
memories of this place.
I went to my grandparents’ house to pick them up to go to the Phoenix Water Park. I was excited to go to the park, even though the car ride made me tired. First, we went to the hotel to rest. I was happy because the TV was very big, but was disappointed because there weren’t many channels to watch. I went to sleep.
The next day we went to the water park. When I first got there, it was very crowded. I was so confused that I didn’t know which way I had to go. I went to the water slide, but when I got there, there was a very long line to wait. I had to wait one hour, but finally, I was able to go on the slide. The scariest part was when I came off the water slide. I am not heavy, so I was going fast and I flew in the air. I thought I was going to die, but luckily I survived.
My trip to the water park was my favorite trip I have taken. I want to go to that water park again. I will tell people to go there because the hotel service is good and the water park is fun. I have good memories of this place.
Discussion
Talk about Daniel's trip to the water park.
Who went with Daniel to the water park?
What was the scariest part of his day at the park?
What is your favorite water park?