I think that the most interesting animal is the snake. Snakes have unusual mouth structure. They can swallow 2 times prey than their mouth. Because their bones of jaw don't connect themselves and their jaws are dislocated. So it is possible that the snake swallow an alligator. Snakes usally live everywhere even though houses except apartments.
Jennifer,
I like the informative paragraph you shared on snakes. I like that you wrote about an unusual fact that makes them so fascinating. You use some great vocabulary words and terms in order to describe the subject, such as "mouth structure" and "dislocated". Very nice.
I made some corrections in your paragraph and highlighted them below:
I think the most interesting animal is the snake. Snakes have an unusual mouth structure. They can swallow prey 2 times the size of their mouth because their jawbones don't connect themselves and their jaws are dislocated. So it is possible for a snake to swallow an alligator. Snakes usually live everywhere even houses, except apartments.
Thanks again, we will talk about these corrections a bit more tomorrow in class!