Reading humaism classic series is my dream. This winter I read 'Apologia Socrates' and I was deeply impressed.
Visiting Tasha's garden and spending time too much are my dreams, too.
At there I would feel relaxed and I remind her.
Writing long letters for my daughter is my old dream.
It would contain my wish, thiking, love and trivial things for living.
Jennifer- Great speech about your dreams! Thank you for choosing three different dreams that you have. You use some really nice expressions to describe each one. "I was deeply impressed" is a really nice way to show that something affected you. It sounds very advanced. I think that was my favorite.
Some corrections:
-humaism= humanism
-instead of saying "spending time too much" it would be better to say "spending too much time there" or "spending a lot of time there"
-you can leave out the word "at" in "at there", so the sentence could just be "There, I would feel relaxed"
-In this context, you should write "remember her" instead of "remind her". Remind means to bring something up again, remember is thinking about someone or something from a past moment.
Excellent job! If you have any questions feel free to ask me on Monday :)
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