Have you ever heard of Pororo? Pororo is the famous character in Korea. Every kid watch Pororo and they buy things of Pororo. I wonder why kids like Pororo first but when I saw that, I realized why they love Pororo. Pororo is a really qute pengiun. He wears glasses. Glasses is his attractive point. If you see that I'm sure you'll like that.!!
Hi Jin! Thank you for writing about a popular character. I like how you began with the question, "Have you ever heard of Pororo?" It is a good question and a nice way to introduce the topic.
I have some corrections for you. This time I am going to give you the sentence that needs correcting, and I want you to try and see if you can fix the mistake:
1."Pororo is the famous character in Korea."
2. "Every kid watch and they buy things of Pororo."
3." Pororo is a really qute penguin."
4. "Glasses is his attractive point."
The part of the sentence that needs a change is in dark letters.
See if you can fix these sentences...
See you in class!! :)