My favorite sport is swimming.
I feel cool when I am swimming.
I used to go to the swimming pool.
There's a 4 kinds of stroke about swimming.
It's called freestyle,breaststroke,and backstroke,also butterflystroke.
I like breaststroke the best.
The hardest stroke is butterflystroke so I do't like it.
Now I don't swim but when I grow up, I will swim for exercise.
Excellent paragraph about swimming, Yelim. I especially liked how you added at the end how you will use swimming in the future.
Remember: BE CAREFUL with differences in sentences between SINGULAR (one thing) and PLURAL (many things)
Example: "There's a 4 kind of stroke..."
In this sentence you are talking about 4 strokes. 4 is more than one, so how can you change this sentence to make it better?
We will review this more in class this week :)
Nice job! See you soon!