Q: Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenience. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Is specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A : Give the choice between the computers have made life easier and more convenience and it made like more complex and stressful. I would prefer the computer is easy to make our life to convenice.
There are some reason why I am thinking.
To begin with, It is make to simple communication. Actually, I am working as commercial company. So I frequently use social network system trough out the computer. If I send to E-mail to abroad that will be received rapidly to them. As well as, In the network system that it is share to other countries people at the same time. Even international telephone communication is easier and more affordable because of computer.
Secondly, In the computer system use kind of technical skills. I am a visual merchandiser. This job position needs to technical skills about design program tools( Photoshop, Illustlator, Auto cad, 3D MAX). It is help other division understand for our plans.
Even though the computer made to confuse our life. I think, we are not able to live without computer now
Nice job on the second essay question! This time I made your corrections bold. Once again I would like you to look at the changes I made in comparison with the original sentences that you wrote. Notice the order of the words in the sentences. For example:
I changed "It is make to simple communication" to "It makes communication simple"
Look it over and we can talk about it more during our classtime! Thanks again!
There are some reasons why I am thinking this.
To begin with, It makes communication simple. Actually, I am working at a commercial company. So I frequently use social network systems throughout the computer. If I send E-mails to abroad, they will be received rapidly.
The network system shares to people in other countries at the same time. Even international telephone communication is easier and more affordable because of the computer.
Secondly, with the computer system we use kind of technical skills. I am a visual merchandiser. This job position needs technical skills about design program tools( Photoshop, Illustlator, Auto cad, 3D MAX). It is helps other divisions understand our plans.
Even though the computer confuses our life. I think, we are not able to live without the computer now