hmmm.... laura?
I need to make a speech on May 20th.
Can you fix these???
Hello, seo2 students? My name is Jimin Lee. I am the producer of Seo2 Broadcast coperation. I am so pleased to be the producer of SBC.Being the producer was my dream. Do you guys know why I wanted to be a producer? two or three weeks ago, my teacher told our class about the espresso man. espresso man is a person who helps people to be famous. even producers don't get to be on the TV, they can help annoucers, reporters and engineers. I wanted to be a espresso man. So I became one. So, I am very pleased to be the producer ot SBC. Our group will be presenting scool news, sports, weather, quiz and also other things every wednesday. we will do the best we can do to annouce intersting things. Please participate to our fun and awesome broadcast. This is the first time for us so, we could make some mistakes. I believe seo2 students will forgive us. Let's bring them good luck fot the annoucers, reporters and producers and engineers !Thank you for listening and have a wonderful and fantastic day!
This is very good Judy!
It might be good for you to explain a little more about idea of the espresso man and how a producer is like an espresso man.
I made a few small edits:
Hello, seo2 students? My name is Jimin Lee. I am the producer of Seo2 Broadcast Corporation. I am so pleased to be the producer of SBC. Being the producer was my dream. Do you guys know why I wanted to be a producer? Two or three weeks ago, my teacher told our class about the espresso man. The espresso man is a person who helps other people to be famous. Being a producer is like being an espresso man. Even though producers aren't famous and don't get to be on the TV, they help announcers, reporters and engineers. I wanted to be an espresso man, so I became one. So, I am very pleased to be the producer at SBC. Our group will be presenting school news, sports, weather, quizzes and also other things every Wednesday. We will do the best we can do to announce interesting things. Please participate in our fun and awesome broadcast. This is the first time for us so, we could make some mistakes. I believe seo2 students will forgive us. Please wish the announcers, reporters, producers and engineers good luck! Thank you for listening and have a wonderful and fantastic day!