JOHN's BOARD
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Homework: write an essay on how to ride a bicycle.
FIXED ESSAY
First, you should put your foot on the pedal and get ready to step on it. But you should be balanced so you can ride you bike correctly.
Second, step on the pedal hard and then, place your hands on the handle bars. Now, you can control the bike.
Third, you should be patient when you are changing direction, so you do not fall down. Don't use your brakes to stop changing direction or you can fall down. For advice, you should wear protection pads to keep your body safe. Don't go too fast on the curved or hard road
Overall, you should step on the pedal and get your balanced, then force your step on the pedal, grab the handle bars and don't change direction too hard.
I will tell you about how to ride a bike.
First, you should put on your foot on the pedal and ready to step. But you should be balanced which you can go correctly.
Second, step the pedal hard and fix your handle in the middle. Now, you can control the bike.
Third, when you are changing the direction, you should be patient of doing this that you can fall while you are chaging the direction. Don't use brake to stop changing the direction, that you can fall down. For advice, you should wear the protect pad to keep your body safe. Don't go to fast on the curved or hard road.
Overall, you should step on the pedal and get balanced, forced to step hard and make your handdle in middle, and don't change direction to hard.