I like to spend leisure time watching TV, playing with my sister, and do computer games. My favorite one is playing with my sister. We usually play school, pretend to be waiter,cook,or hair disigner. And when we do these things,my father also play with us. My second favorite one is watching TV. I like to watch Hanna-Montana and other fun channels. Last thing I like to spend my leisure time with is playing computer game. I don't have a special game I like but anyway I like it all. I spend my leisure time like this.
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Carrie
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I like to spend leisure time watching TV, playing with my sister, and doing computer games. My favorite one is playing with my sister. We usually play school, pretend to be waiters,cooks,or hair designers. And when we do these things,my father also plays with us. My second favorite one is watching TV. I like to watch Hanna-Montana and other fun channels. Last thing I like to spend my leisure time with is playing computer games. I don't have a special game I like but anyway I like them all. I spend my leisure time like this.