This is my story I wish you will like this..... It's a little bit long......
But, please read until the chapter 1# finish!
I will make chapter 2 # soon as I can!
Title : Dolphin talker
-Prologue-
In Canada there was a famous dolphin doctor Ms.Dollin. Actually she wasn't a 'dolphin doctor'. She is called 'dolphin doctor Ms.Dollin' because she said she could understand the dolphin language(words). In the first place, nobody believed her. So they called a real dolphin doctor (who studies dolphin words.). Mr. Crosh.
Wed. Jan. 21. 2010 Mr. Crosh's office.
Ding, Dong, Ding, Dong
Mr. Crosh : Hello, are you Ms. Dollin??
Ms. Dollin : Yes, yes I am.
Mr. Crosh : Come in.
Ms. Dollin : Thank you.
Mr. Crosh : Would you sit down at that seat??
Ms. Dollin : Sure.
Mr. Crosh and Ms. Dollin sit down in front of a computer.
Mr. Crosh : Ms. Dollin......
Ms. Dollin : Oh, just call me Dolly.
Mr. Crosh : Okay...... Ms. Do.... I mean Dolly, I will turn on some dolphin sounds. And you have to say what it says.
Ms. Dollin : Okay!
Mr. Crosh leans to the window and reads the paper.(in the paper there is the meaning of the dolphin words.)
Mr. Crosh : Number one.
CREECK PPEECC CCLEC HIPCCLI
Ms. Dollin : It says...... I have a strange dream.
Mr. Crosh : You are right! Now number two......
CCLEE ILILLI CCLI
Ms. Dollin : You are very young.
Mr. Crosh : Oh! You are good!
About 2 hours
Mr. Crosh : Number....... 211.
CCILL CCILL
Ms. Dollin : Bye, Bye.
Mr. Crosh : I believe you! Dolly! I admire you!
Ms. Dollin : Thanks. Can I go?
Mr. Crosh : Of course. Thank you! And sorry, I didn't believe you...... Bye!
Ms. Dollin : No problem! Bye!
3years later...... Everybody knows Ms. Dollin, and she was very famous!
Now the real story begins!
Chapter 1 #
One morning.
Ring, Ring, Ring, Ring
Ms Dollin : Dolphin doctor Dollin speaking.
Professor : Hi, this is Professor Tolly, can you come to the MeeMee aquarium??
Ms. Dollin : Um...... one second....... Let me see my schedule. Yes! But why??
Professor : My student wants to see you talking with a dolphin......
Ms. Dollin : Okay, how about 3?
Professor : Thank you! See you at 3!
At the aquarium.
Ms. Dollin : Hello! Professor! And Hello! Everybody!
Professor : Hello Ms. Dollin.
Students : Hi!
Ms. Dollin goes near to the professor.
Ms. Dollin : Just call me Dolly.
And goes near to the students.
Ms. Dollin : I will hear what the dolphin says.
She goes near the dolphin.
Dolphin : CCILL, CCILL, CCCCIDLLI
Ms. Dollin : It says....... hi, I'm Lilla
Dolphin : CCCCCCILLTD! CCILL, CCILL
Ms. Dollin : Welcome!
Dolphin : CCIDDILLDA, CCILL, TTIDDCCI
Ms. Dollin : I like it here!
And so on.......
Students : Wow! You are a genius! How can you understand the dolphin words? We want to understand the dolphin words!
Ms. Dollin : Oh, this is nothing....... It's not a big thing! Ha! Ha!
Rella : Hey! You actually think that you can understand a dolphin?
Ms. Dollin : You saw me!
Rella : You are just making any words! Hey! Everybody! You guys believe this?
Students : Sit down! Rella! What do you know?
Ms. Dollin : See? You heard them! Sit down little girl!
Rella : But!
Dick : Rella Shults! Can you please close your big mouth?!
Students : Yeah!
Professor : Students! Calm down! And Ms. Shults sit down please! Ms. Dollin sorry about everything.......
Ms. Dollin : Oh, I saw many students like Ms. Shults.
Rella : But!
Professor and Ms. Dollin : No buts!
Rella turned red and sat down on her seat.
Dolphin : CILECCILL!
Ms. Dollin : Oh! See now dolphin Lilly is saying sit down!
Professor : Ms. Shults! I need to see you over there! And Ms. Dollin can you keep talking to the dolphin?
Ms. Dollin : Umm........ That girl make me very mad! But! Because of the students and Professor Tolly, I will keep talk to dolphin Lilly.
Professor and Rella go to the other side of the class.
Professor : Ms. Shults! Why are you acting like this! Infront of the famous dolphin doctor Ms. Dollin!
Rella : You believe her? Professor! You believe her! Am I wrong?
Professor : Ms. Shults! Thats not important right now don't you know?
Rella : This is not important? Then whats important!?
Professor : Oh, Man! Lets just discuss tonight! In my office!And right now! You have to listen to her!
Rella : Why? Because of your professional pride?
Professor : I didn't say like that! Rella Shults! Sit down over there and listen to her! Understood?
Rella : Oh, forget it!
And walk to her seat.
Professor : Why is she acting like her? My professor pride? When did I say about that!
Night, In professor Tolly's office.
Knock, Knock.
Professor : Come in.
Rella opens the door and stands infront of Professor Tolly.
Professor : Sit down please.
Rella sit downs.
Professor : Ms. Shults, Do you know why you are here?
Rella : Yes.
Professor : Then, tell me the reason.
Rella : Because I ruined your professional pride.
Professor : Umm........ Okay, And?
Rella : I didn't listen to Ms. Dophin.
Professor : It's Ms. Dollin.
Rella : What ever.
Professor : Now, tell me why.
Rella : She is telling a lie!
Professor : How can you be sure that Ms. Dollin is telling a lie.
Rella : Umm....... I have to ask something.
Professor : First answer my question.
Rella : Dolphin's name is not Lilly!
Professor : What? How could you know?
Rella : Umm.......Do you have to know these things?
Professor : Yes, yes I do.
Rella : Then, how can you be sure about things?
Professor : Thats simple. Ms. Dollin was proved by dolphin doctor Mr. Crosh.
Rella : Okay! Okay! I accept this! Now feel better?
Professor : Yes. Now ask the question that you were trying to tell me.
Rella : Do you believe that woman?
Professor : Yes. And you have to call her Ms. Dollin.
Rella : What ever.
Professor : Ms. Shults. I wish you could be more kinder.
Rella : And why should I?
Professor : Ms. Shults. You can't understand dolphin words right?
Rella didn't answer.
Professor : Ms. Shults?
Rella : Okay! I can't understand dolphin words!
Professor : So.......
Rella and Professor : You should admire Ms. Dollin who understand dolphin words.
Rella : No! I don't believe you!
Professor : Umm....... Then, I have one choice. I will give your grade F.
Rella : F? No way!
Professor : Or! You could believe her.
Rella : Okay....... Fine.......
Professor : Good! Then my work is done. You can leave.
Rella : If I could speak and understand dolphin words....... What changes?
Professor : Then, I will understand you and you will have A+ and you will be famous so you can believe Ms. Dollin is telling a lie.
Rella : Then...... Actually, I can understand and talk dolphin words....... This is TOP SECRET!
Professor : Oh? How good of you! Now GET OUT! I can't accept you lying to me!
Rella just goes out and shuts the door.
Professor : What is wrong with her? She could talk and understand dolphin words? Ha! Ha! Then, I can talk with a troll!
Night, In side of the aquarium dolphin pool.
Dolphin Walter : Hey! Gilbert! Today, I met a crazy woman!
Dolphin Gilbert : Oh, the woman who lies to everyone that she could understand us?
Dolphin Walter : Yeah! Weird........ And above the water, I kept coughing! But the crazy woman who was called Ms. Doll? Ms. Dollar? I don't know....... What ever she is called, she kept saying my name is Lilly, and that I like being here, I'm twelve........ It's funny, I think in people ears my cough sounds strange.........
Dolphin Gilbert : Awful! You are Walter, thirteen, and you hate being here! And of course, so do I. I miss my friends! Brian, Ben, Sarah, Jessy, Carrie, Henry, Harry, Jack, Mark, Anderson, Ashley......... Oh! I miss them!
Dolphin Walter : Me too....... Oh! I almost forgot!
Dolphin Gilbert : What? What?
Dolphin Walter : Everybody believed the crazy woman. Except, one girl! Her name was........ Bella? Lella? Rella? Yes! Yes! Yes! Her name was Rella! She didn't believe the crazy woman!
Dolphin Gilbert : How strange! But what a clever girl!
Dolphin Walter : Yeah! I think she knows something........
Dolphin Gilbert : Just forget it! It's not a big deal you know!
Dolphin Walter : Your right........ Why am I thinking about a human? Ha! Ha! whats wrong with me!
And the conversation continues.
I changed it all!
Every reader, The writer Katherine is going to write Chapter 2# until next week. Please wait.
-Made by Katherine-
Good job! You have an excellent ear for dialogue. You have set up quite the complicated and mature scenario...I can't wait to find out what happens next. Carrie
Tittle : Dolphin talker
-Prologue-
In Canada there was a famous dolphin doctor Ms.Dollin. Actually she wasn't a 'dolphin doctor'. She is callinged 'dolphin doctor Ms.Dollin' because she said she could understand the dolphin language(words). In the first place, nobody believed her. So they called a real dolphin doctor (who studies dolphin words.), Mr. Crosh. If you have a "first place", you must also write at least a "second place" as well.
Wed. Jan. 21. 2010 Mr. Crosh's office.
Ding, Dong, Ding, Dong
Mr. Crosh : Hello, are you Ms. Dollin??
Ms. Dollin : Yes, yes I am.
Mr. Crosh : Come in.
Ms. Dollin : Thank you.
Mr. Crosh : Would you sit down at that seat??
Ms. Dollin : Sure.
Mr. Crosh and Ms. Dollin sit down in front of a computer.
Mr. Crosh : Ms. Dollin......
Ms. Dollin : Oh, just call me Dolly.
Mr. Crosh : Okay...... Ms. Do.... I mean Dolly, I will turn on a some dolphin sounds. And you have to say what it says.
Ms. Dollin : Okay!
Mr. Crosh leans to the window and reads the paper (in the paper there are is the meaning of the dolphin words). for brackets punctuation marks go after the last bracket.
Mr. Crosh : Number one.
CREECK PPEECC CCLEC HIPCCLI
Ms. Dollin : It says...... I have a strange dream.
Mr. Crosh : You are right! Now number two......
CCLEE ILILLI CCLI
Ms. Dollin : You are very young.
Mr. Crosh : Oh! You are good!
About 2 hours
Mr. Crosh : Number....... 211.
CCILL CCILL
Ms. Dollin : Bye, Bye.
Mr. Crosh : I believe you! Dolly! I admire you!
Ms. Dollin : Thanks. Can I go?
Mr. Crosh : Of course. Thank you! And sorry, I didn't believe you...... Bye!
Ms. Dollin : No problem! Bye!
3years later...... Everybody people knows Ms. Dollin, and she was very famous!
Now the real story begins!
Chapter 1 #
One morning.
Ring, Ring, Ring, Ring
Ms Dollin : Dolphin doctor Dollin speaking.
Professor : Hi, this is Professor Tolly, can you come to the MeeMee aquarium??
Ms. Dollin : Um...... one second....... Let me see my schedule. Yes! But why??
Professor : My student wants to see you talking with a dolphin......
Ms. Dollin : Okay, how about 3?
Professor : Thank you! See you at 3!
At the aquarium.
Ms. Dollin : Hello! Professor! And Hello! Everybody!
Professor : Hello, Ms. Dollin.
Students : Hi!
Ms. Dollin goes near to the professor.
Ms. Dollin : Just call me Dolly.
And goes near to the students.
Ms. Dollin : I will hear what the dolphin says.
She goes near the dolphin.
Dolphin : CCILL, CCILL, CCCCIDLLI
Ms. Dollin : It says....... hi, I'm Lilla
Dolphin : CCCCCCILLTD! CCILL, CCILL
Ms. Dollin : Welcome!
Dolphin : CCIDDILLDA, CCILL, TTIDDCCI
Ms. Dollin : I like it here!
And so on.......
Students : Wow! You are a genius! How can you understand the dolphin words? We want to understand the dolphin words!
Ms. Dollin : Oh, this is nothing....... It's not a big thing! Ha! Ha!
Rella : Hey! You actually think that you can understand a dolphin?
Ms. Dollin : You saw me!
Rella : You are just making any words! Hey! Everybody! You guys believe this?
Students : Sit down! Rella! What do you know?
Ms. Dollin : See? You heard them! Sit down little girl!
Rella : But!
Dick : Rella Shults! Can you please close your big mouth?!
Students : Yeah!
Professor : Students! Calm down! And Ms. Shults sit down please! Ms. Dollin sorry about everything.......
Ms. Dollin : Oh, I saw many students like Ms. Shults.
Rella : But!
Professor and Ms. Dollin : No buts!
Rella turned red and sat down on her seat.
Dolphin : CILECCILL!
Ms. Dollin : Oh! See now dolphin Lilly is saying sit down!
Professor : Ms. Shults! I need to see you over there! And Ms. Dollin can you keep talking to the dolphin?
Ms. Dollin : Umm........ That girl make me very mad! But! Because of the students and Professor Tolly, I will keep talk to dolphin Lilly.
Professor and Rella goes to the other side of the class.
Professor : Ms. Shults! Why are you acting like this! In front of the famous dolphin doctor Ms. Dollin!
Rella : You believe her? Professor! You believe her! Am I wrong?
Professor : Ms. Shults! Thats not important right now don't you know?
Rella : This is not important? Then whats important!?
Professor : Oh, Man! Lets just discuss tonight! In my office!And right now! You have to listen to her!
Rella : Why? Because of your professorional pride?
Professor : I didn't say like that! Rella Shults! Sit down over there and listen to her! Understood?
Rella : Oh, forget it!
And walked to her seat.
Professor : Why is she acting like her? My professorional pride? When did I say about that!
Night, In professor Tolly's office.
Knock, Knock.
Professor : Come in.
Rella opens the door and stands in front of Professor Tolly.
Professor : Sit down please.
Rella sit downs.
Professor : Ms. Shults, Do you know why you are here?
Rella : Yes.
Professor : Then, tell me the reason.
Rella : Because I ruined your professorional pride.
Professor : Umm........ Okay, And?
Rella : I didn't listen to Ms. Dophin.
Professor : It's Ms. Dollin.
Rella : Whatever.
Professor : Now, tell me why.
Rella : She is telling a lie!
Professor : How can you be sure that Ms. Dollin is telling a lie.
Rella : Umm....... I have to ask something.
Professor : First answer my question.
Rella : Dolphin's name is not Lilly!
Professor : What? How could you know?
Rella : Umm.......Do you have to know these things?
Professor : Yes, yes I do.
Rella : Then, how could professor can you be sure about things?
Professor : That's simple. Ms. Dollin is was proved by dolphin doctor Mr. Crosh.
Rella : Okay! Okay! I accept this! Now feel better?
Professor : Yes. Now ask a the question what that you were trying to tell me.
Rella : Do you believe that woman?
Professor : Yes. And you have to call her Ms. Dollin.
Rella : Whatever.
Professor : Ms. Shults. I wish you could be more kinder.
Rella : And why should I?
Professor : Ms. Shults. You can't understand dolphin words right?
Rella didn't answer.
Professor : Ms. Shults?
Rella : Okay! I can't understand dolphin words!
Professor : So.......
Rella and Professor : You should admire Ms. Dollin who understands dolphin words.
Rella : No! I don't believe you!
Professor : Umm....... Then, I have one choice. I will give your grade F.
Rella : F? No way!
Professor : Or! You could believe her.
Rella : Okay....... Fine.......
Professor : Good! Then my work is done. You could can leave.
Rella : If I could speak and understand dolphin words....... What changes?
Professor : Then, I will understand you and you will have A+ and you will be famous so you can believe Ms. Dollin is telling a lie.
Rella : Then...... Actually, I could can understand and talk dolphin words....... This is TOP SECRET!
Professor : Oh? How good of you! Now GET OUT! I can't accept you lying to me!
Rella just goes out and shuts the door.
Professor : What is wrong with her? She could talk and understand dolphin words? Ha! Ha! Then, I can talk with a troll!
Night, In side of the aquarium dolphin pool.
Dolphin Walter : Hey! Gilbert! Today, I met a crazy woman!
Dolphin Gilbert : Oh, the woman who lies to everyone that she could understand us?
Dolphin Walter : Yeah! Weird........ And above the water, I keep kept cougheding! But the crazy woman who was called Ms. Doll? Ms. Dollar? I don't know....... Whatever she is called, she kept saying my name is Lilly, and that I like being here, I'm twelve........ It's funny, I think in people's ears my cough sounds strange.........
Dolphin Gilbert : Awful! You are Walter, thirteen, and you hate being here! And of course, so do I. I miss my friends! Brian, Ben, Sarah, Jessy, Carrie, Henry, Harry, Jack, Mark, Anderson, Ashley......... Oh! I miss them!
Dolphin Walter : Me either too....... Oh! I almost forgot!
Dolphin Gilbert : What? What?
Dolphin Walter : Everybody people believed the crazy woman. Except, one girl! Her name was........ Bella? Lella? Rella? Yes! Yes! Yes! Her name was Rella! She didn't believe the crazy woman!
Dolphin Gilbert : How strange! But what a clever girl!
Dolphin Walter : Yeah! I think she knows something........
Dolphin Gilbert : Just forget it! It's not a big deal you know!
Dolphin Walter : Your right........ Why am I thinking about a human? Ha! Ha! whats wrong with me!
And the conversation continues.