Delightful.  I had a lot of fun reading this.  I hope Carrie and Katherine have learned their lesson.  I think you will have no problem with the comedy skit! -- Carrie

Title :Dolphin's story

Jinny : Hello! What's your name? Oh! No!

She shouted. Because she realized that the dolphins were Carrie and Katherine!  (why is this in bold?)

Jinny : Are you guys........Katherine and Carrie?

But Katherine and Carrie didn't know that Jinny changed to a person.

Katherine : Carrie! That women is speaking our words! And that women knows our name! It's ridiculous!

Carrie : Wow! How can she speak our words? If I was at school right now, I will tell my friends that I saw a person speaking like us!

Katherine : I'm so sad..........I want to go home!

Carrie : Oh no.

Katherine : What's an 'oh no'?

Carrie : I think she is...........Jinny.

Katherine : Ha Ha Ha! You're saying she is like stupid Jinny!

Carrie : No....... Listen.

Jinny : Oh my goodness! What should I do? Do I need to rescue them? Jinny! Think of the past. They always teased you. Remember?

Jinny were was talking to her self.

Katherine : Oh, Carrie. If she is Jinny, how could she be a person! Don't be silly.

Carrie :　Katherine! Please listen carefully!

Jinny : Do they know that I turned into a person? Oh, they will think I'm still a dolphin like them.

Katherine : ...............

Katherine and Carrie were all silencet.

And also people were staring at Jinny. People thought that Jinny was crazy because dolphin words are very weird.

people person 1 : What a crazy women! She are is talking to dolphins!

people person  2 : With alien words! Let's go. I don't want to see that crazy women.

Jinny knew that people are were talking about her. But she didn't care.

Jinny was thinking of how to rescue Katherine and Carrie.

Jinny ; hmm.........oh! I have a good idea!

Jinny had an good idea for saving them. Jinny started to speak dolphin words again.

Jinny : Carrie, Katherine. I hope you guys are listening. I have a good idea for you guys. I can help you two going back to our, no..........your guys home. (you guys is slang but slang is okay for dialogue, but guys's home trips the tongue up, so your is better)

Jinny didn't want an answer. But Carrie started to say........

Carrie : Are you really Jinny? But how??? Why????

Jinny : I hate you, Carrie. You are not asking me, "are you okay?" Did you already forget the 'Dolphin Rule" number 7? "number 7. If you meet a friend, you have to ask them, "are you okay?" the first. I think now you are the 'dummy'. Not me.

Carrie : Fine. ARE YOU OKAY???

Jinny : Yep. Very fine. Thank you.  (haha, very funny!)

Carrie : Now back to the story. Oh! I think I don't have to ask a stupid question like 'Are you Jinny?'. Because now I knew you are the 'real Jinny'. Still same. Your dirty personality!  (i don't know what dirty personality means, it is not an english expression)

Jinny : Now the 'dirty personality' will save you.

Carrie : Really??

Jinny didn't answer to Carrie's question.

Jinny : Hello up there. KATHERINE.

Katherine : Hello............Are you okay?  (haha)

Jinny : Yeah. Fine.

Katherine : Are you really going to save us?

Jinny : Maybe. Or maybe not.

Katherine : But how??

Jinny : Easy. I will gonna buy you two. (gonna is okay when writing dialogue for a script, but any other time use the standard English of "going to", not gonna)

Katherine & Carrie : What?!

Jinny : I said I'llm gonna buty you guys.

Carrie : I don't want to be your dolphin. How about you Katherine?

Katherine : .........

Jinny : Fine. I will only buy Katherine. Katherine, I will buy you and let you out to the BIG BLUE OCEAN!

Carrie : Katherine! Say that you won't!!

Katherine : Sorry, Carrie. I don't want to stay at this aquarium with a lot of people.

And Jinny said that she will let us to go to the ocean!

Carrie : You idiot!! That's a trick! Can't you remember?? We always teased Jinny! So she will buy us and KILL US!!!

Katherine : No!! Jinny is stupid, but not evil!!

Jinny : I am what???  (haha)

Katherine : Nothing. So Carrie! If you are not gonna follow Jinny, then stay here!

I am going to GO!!!

Carrie : !!!!!!!!!!  (!!!!!! is not a proper response, perhaps "Carrie looks at Katherine in shock" would be better)

Jinny went to the person who sells the dolphins.

Jinny : Seir?? Can I buy that dolphin?? With a the black dot?

Person : Sorry, But if you buy that dolphin, you have to buy the other one too. Because if you only buy one of them, the other dolphin will be so lonely.

Jinny : Really? ..... Ok then. I will buy all of them.

So Jinny bought Carrie and Katherine. Jinny moved them very carefully. Then she let Carrie and Katherine. (this last sentence is unfinished...let them do what??)

Jinny : Now you guys are free. Bye.

Carrie : Jinny I'm really sorry. And thank you. I will never forget you.

Katherine : Me too. Bye~

Carrie and Katherine jumped into the ocean.

The end