Good job and great detail. Watch those verbs though that should end with an "s" such as he shuts, he jumps, she walks, etc. Carrie
The
Venus Flytrap
The Venus Flytrap
grows on a in mossy wetlands . It measures 20cm~30cm long. It has is a rhizome plant that looks
like a bulb, and its stem is straight. Its leaves are round and at the edge of
the leaves, it has a long fur like a thorn. The Venus fFlytrap's leaves have a lot
of glands so it can lure insects. And if a insect sits on the Venus flytrap, it
shuts it's leaves very quickly and eats the insect by secretion digestive fluid (juice).
And Its country of origin is America. (Technically, America is not a country. It is either a continent such as South or North America, or it is the country: The United States of America. Please be specific).
Good job and great detail. Watch those verbs though that should end with an "s" such as he shuts, he jumps, she walks, etc. Carrie
The Venus Flytrap
The Venus Flytrap grows on a in mossy wetlands . It measures 20cm~30cm long. It has is a rhizome plant that looks like a bulb, and its stem is straight. Its leaves are round and at the edge of the leaves, it has a long fur like a thorn. The Venus fFlytrap's leaves have a lot of glands so it can lure insects. And if a insect sits on the Venus flytrap, it shuts it's leaves very quickly and eats the insect by secretion digestive fluid (juice). And Its country of origin is America. (Technically, America is not a country. It is either a continent such as South or North America, or it is the country: The United States of America. Please be specific).
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