Jack's Summer Vacation:

Let me tell you about my summer vacation.  I went to a lot of places.  For example, I went to the ocean, the swimming pool, and the amusement park.  I had a great time there.  
At the ocean, I caught many fish and clams.  Me and my family had a delicious fish soup using what we caught.  
I dug a deep hole at the beach.  I even took a nap there in the hole.  Some children were shouting because of the crabs.  
My father was swimming so well, my mom took a nap on the beach under a huge umbrella, and I was still digging a giant hole.  I rode in a speedboat with my father.  

I went to the swimming pool with my friend and both of our mothers.  There we dove into the pool.  It was so cool because the pool water was cold.  We had a great time there too.  I went to the amusement park with my family.  We saw many animals there.  There were interesting animals like bats, white tigers, and golden monkeys.  It was the first time I saw those animals.  After we saw the animals, we rode some rides except my mother because she is afraid of all rides.  She just rode the marry-go-round.  That was really boring. I had the greatest summer vacation!  Next summer vacation I will ride scarier rides.