Rollan was worried because his brother was sick and he needed medicine. He stole medicine and got caught. But a green
cloak asked him if he was eleven. Then he said "Yes!" So he drank the necter. And with a flash, a falcon named Eissix
appeared next to him. Then a green cloak appeared and took him to the green cloaks' base where he met Meilin, Abeke, and
Conor. The green cloaks asked them if they want to join the green cloak. But Rollan disagrees and becomes a gray cloak.
In the book Spirit Animals there is a boy named Rollan. Rollan is 11 years old who lives in Stetriol. (TALK ABOUT HIM BEING AN ORPHAN)
Rollan was worried because his brother was sick and he needed medicine. He stole medicine and got caught. After being put in jail, a green cloak named Zerif asked him if he was eleven. Then he said "Yes!" So Zerif got Rollan out of jail.
(TALK ABOUT WHAT THE NECTOR CEREMONY) Zerif gave necter to Rollan. So he drank the necter. And with a flash, a falcon named Eissix appeared next to him. Then a green cloak appeared and took him to the Green Cloaks' base where he met Meilin, Abeke, and Conor. The green cloaks asked them if they want to join the green cloak. But Rollan disagrees and becomes a gray cloak because he does not think he is going to be any help.
conqerers are the green cloaks enemies.
there is a bad team that is the worst enemy to the Green cloaks.The conqerers want to free the bad spirit animal. So they are in progress of collecting the talis man. Rollan is sort of scared when the conqerers attack them. they had wepons. such as swords. Rollan thought that he needed to calm down the lion who got the talisman. Rollan did not know how to calm the angry lion.
In the book Spirit Animals there is a boy named Rollan. Rollan is 11 years old who lives in Stetriol. Rollan is an orphan becaus his parents died long ago.
Rollan was worried because his brother was sick and he needed medicine. He stole medicine and got caught. After being put in jail, a green cloak named Zerif asked him if he was eleven. Then he said "Yes!" So Zerif got Rollan out of jail.
Zerif told Rollan that every eleven years old shoud drink the necter. Necter is a special liquid that bonds you with a spirt animal. Zerif gave necter to Rollan. So he drank the necter. And with a flash, a falcon named Eissix appeared next to him. Then a green cloak appeared and took him to the Green Cloaks' base where he met Meilin, Abeke, and Conor. The green cloaks asked them if they want to join the green cloak. But Rollan disagrees and becomes a gray cloak because he does not think he is going to be any help.
There is a bad team that is the worst enemy to the Green cloaks.The conqerers want to free the bad spirit animal. So they are in progress of collecting the talisman. Rollan is sort of scared when the conqerers attack them. They had wepons. such as swords. Rollan thought that he needed to calm down the lion who got the talisman. Rollan did not know how to calm the angry lion. So Rollan just petted the lion. And the lion calmed down.
(FIX SPELLING--CONQUERERS, ETC.; PUT GREEN CLOAKS IN TITLE CASE)
In the book Spirit Animals there is a boy named Rollan. Rollan is 11 years old who lives in Stetriol. Rollan is an orphan becaus his parents died long ago. Rollan was worried because his brother was sick and he needed medicine. He stole medicine and got caught. After being put in jail, a green cloak named Zerif asked him if he was eleven. Then he said "Yes!" So Zerif got Rollan out of jail.
Zerif told Rollan that every eleven years old shoud drink the necter. Necter is a special liquid that bonds you with a spirt animal. Zerif gave necter to Rollan. So he drank the necter. And with a flash, a falcon named Eissix appeared next to him. Then a green cloak appeared and took him to the Green Cloaks' base where he met Meilin, Abeke, and Conor (EXPLAIN WHO THE ARE). The green cloaks asked them if they want to join the green cloak. But Rollan disagrees and becomes a gray cloak because he does not think he is going to be any help.
There is a bad team that is the worst enemy to the Green cloaks.The conqerers want to free the bad spirit animal. So they are in progress of collecting the talisman (EXPLAIN WHAT THE TALISMAN IS, AND WHY THEY WANT IT). Rollan is sort of scared when the conqerers attack them. They had wepons. such as swords. Rollan thought that he needed to calm down the lion who got the talisman. Rollan did not know how to calm the angry lion. So Rollan just petted the lion. And the lion calmed down.
(FIX GRAMMAR AND SPELLING; PUT TOGETHER WITH REST OF WRITING IN ONE POST)
that night Rollan could not sleep. so he went to the bathroom. when he came out he saw Mellin sleepwalking. this was all because of the evil snake named Garathon (EXPLAIN MORE ABOUT MELLIN BEING UNDER HIS SPELL). after few hours it was morning. and the conqerers came to battel again. this time Rollan defeated almost all of them.
Rollan got hurt a lot. so he rested. mean while, the rest of the green cloaks fought the conqerers off. they healed Rollan. and rested in their room in the green cloak's base.
In the book Spirit Animals there is a boy named Rollan. Rollan is 11 years old who lives in Stetriol. Rollan is an orphan becaus his parents died long ago.
Rollan was worried because his brother was sick and he needed medicine. He stole medicine and got caught. After being put in jail, a Green Cloak named Zerif asked him if he was eleven. Then he said "Yes!" So Zerif got Rollan out of jail.
Zerif told Rollan that every eleven years old shoud drink the necter. Necter is a special liquid that bonds you with a spirt animal. Zerif gave necter to Rollan. So he drank the necter. And with a flash, a falcon named Eissix appeared next to him. Then a Green Cloak appeared and took him to the Green Cloaks' base where he met Meilin, Abeke, and Conor. They are Rollan's best friend. The Green Cloaks asked them if they want to join the Green Cloak's team. But Rollan disagrees and becomes a Gray Cloak because he does not think he is going to be any help.There is a bad team that is the worst enemy to the Green cloaks.The conquerers want to free the bad spirit animal. So they are in progress of collecting the talisman. A talis man is a magical element.The conquerers are trying to get the talisman because they are trying to free the bad sprit animal. Rollan is sort of scared when the conquerers attack them. They had wepons. such as swords. Rollan thought that he needed to calm down the lion who has the talisman. Rollan did not know how to calm the angry lion. So Rollan just petted the lion. And the lion calmed down. That night Rollan could not sleep. So he went to the bathroom. When he came out he saw Mellin sleepwalking. This was all because of the evil snake named Gerathon. After few hours it was morning. And the conquerers came to battel again. This time Rollan defeated almost all of them. Rollan got hurt a lot. So he rested. Meanwhile, the rest of the green cloaks fought the conquerers off. They healed Rollan. And rested in their room in the Green Cloak's base. Next morning, Gerathon returns. And they lost one talisman. Also, their mystery gets bigger.
THE END!!!
(KEEP TENSE CONSISTENT)
In the book Spirit Animals there is a boy named Rollan. Rollan is 11 years old who lives in Stetriol. Rollan is an orphan becaus his parents died long ago. Rollan was worried because his brother was sick and he needed medicine. He stole medicine and got caught. After being put in jail, a Green Cloak named Zerif asked him if he was eleven. Then he said "Yes!" So Zerif got Rollan out of jail.
Zerif told Rollan that every eleven years old shoud drink the necter. Necter is a special liquid that bonds you with a spirt animal. Zerif gave necter to Rollan. So he drank the necter. And with a flash, a falcon named Eissix appeared next to him. Then a Green Cloak appeared and took him to the Green Cloaks' base where he met Meilin, Abeke, and Conor (EXPLAIN WHO THEY ARE WHEN ROLLAN MEETS THEM). They are Rollan's best friends (PUT THIS IN THE FUTURE TENSE). The Green Cloaks asked them if they want to join the Green Cloak's team. But Rollan disagrees and becomes a Gray Cloak because he does not think he is going to be any help.
There is a bad team that is the worst enemy to the Green cloaks.The conquerers want to free the bad spirit animal (EXPLAIN WHAT THE BAD SPIRIT ANIMAL IS AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN ITS FREE). So they are in progress of collecting the talisman. A talisman is a magical element. The conquerers are trying to get the talisman because they are trying to free the bad sprit animal.
Rollan is sort of scared when the conquerers attack them. They had wepons. such as swords. Rollan thought that he needed to calm down the lion who has the talisman. Rollan did not know how to calm the angry lion. So Rollan just petted the lion. And the lion calmed down. (EXPLAIN HOW THIS ENDS THE BATTLE)
That night Rollan could not sleep. So he went to the bathroom. When he came out he saw Mellin sleepwalking. This was all because she was under the control of the evil snake named Gerathon. (EXPLAIN ROLLAN WAKES HER UP, ALSO EXPLAIN WHO THE EVIL SNAKE IS)
After few hours it was morning. And the conquerers came to battle again. This time Rollan defeated almost all of them. Rollan got hurt a lot. So he rested. Meanwhile, the rest of the green cloaks fought the conquerers off. They healed Rollan. And rested in their room in the Green Cloak's base.
Next morning, Gerathon returns. And they (BE SPECIFIC) lost one talisman. Also, their mystery gets bigger. (BE MORE SPECIFIC)
In the book Spirit Animals there is a boy named Rollan. Rollan is 11 years old who lives in Stetriol. Rollan is an orphan becaus his parents died long ago. Rollan was worried because his brother was sick and he needed medicine. He stole medicine and got caught. After being put in jail, a Green Cloak named Zerif asked him if he was eleven. Then he said "Yes!" So Zerif got Rollan out of jail.
Zerif told Rollan that every eleven years old shoud drink the necter. Necter is a special liquid that bonds you with a spirt animal. Zerif gave necter to Rollan. So he drank the necter. And with a flash, a falcon named Eissix appeared next to him. Then a Green Cloak appeared and took him to the Green Cloaks' base where he met Meilin, Abeke, and Conor. They also just got their spirit animals. The Green Cloaks asked them if they want to join the Green Cloak's team. But Rollan disagrees and becomes a Gray Cloak because he does not think he is going to be any help.
There is a bad team that is the worst enemy to the Green cloaks.The Conquerers want to free the bad spirit animal. The bad spirit animal is a evil gorila. And he is going to be king of Edras. So they are in progress of collecting the talisman. A talisman is a magical element. The Conquerers are trying to get the talisman because they are trying to free the bad sprit animal.
Rollan is sort of scared when the conquerers attack them. They had wepons. such as swords. Rollan thought that he needed to calm down the lion who has the talisman. Rollan did not know how to calm the angry lion. So Rollan just petted the lion. And the lion calmed down. Then the lion roared at the Conquerers. So the Conquerers ran away.
That night Rollan could not sleep. So he went to the bathroom. When he came out he saw Mellin sleepwalking. This was all because she was under the control of the evil snake named Gerathon. Rollan shakes Meillin. Then Meillin wakes up. Gerathon is a partener of the bad gorila.
After few hours it was morning. And the Conquerers came to battle again. This time Rollan defeated almost all of them. Rollan got hurt a lot. So he rested. Meanwhile, the rest of the green cloaks fought the Conquerers off. They healed Rollan. And rested in their room in the Green Cloak's base.
Next morning, Gerathon returns. And they lost one talisman because Gerathon took it to the Conquerer's base. Also, their mystery gets bigger because nobody on the Green Cloak's team knows where the talisman is.
In the book Spirit Animals there is a boy named Rollan. Rollan is 11years old who lives in Stetriol.
Rollan was worried because his brother was sick and he needed medicine. He stole medicine and got caught. After being put in jail, a green cloak named Zerif asked him if he was eleven. Then he said "Yes!" So Zerif got Rollan out of jail. And gave necter to him. So he drank the necter. And with a flash, a falcon named Eissix appeared next to him. Then a green cloak app-eared and took him to the green cloaks' base where he met Meilin, Abeke, andConor. The green cloaks asked them if they want to join the green cloak. But Rollan disagrees and becomes a gray cloak because he does not think he is going to be any help.