Hello! I am Jimin Lee, the producer of Seoi English Broadcasting Corporation. I feel great to be the producer and director and will help our SBC friends to make a wonderful English broadcast for our seo2 students. There are many good things about being in a SBC group. Your English skill gets better every day and you have fun during practicing. We practice saying the news every Monday and Wednesday in the early morning. And we also write our own news articles and make a ppt for it. On Wednesdays, I'm always scared of making mistakes. When one of us makes a mistake it gets very complicated. I think we did a great job this month, and I'm sure we will do a great job this term. When we graduate Seo2 Elementary School, I hope we have good memories about SBC. We started this term's broadcast on May 22nd, 2013. Students have listened and participated in our broadcast. I am very thankful. I believe that students will have an awesome school life with SBC. Thank you again and have a great day!
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Hello! I am Jimin Lee, the producer and director of Seoi English Broadcasting Corporation (SBC). I feel great to be the producer and director and will help our SBC friends to make a wonderful English broadcast for our seo2 students. There are many good things about being in a SBC group. Your English skill gets better every day and you have fun during practicing the news. We practice saying the news every Monday and Wednesday in the early morning. And we also write our own news articles and make a powerpoint for it. On Wednesdays during our broadcast, I'm always scared of making mistakes. When one of us makes a mistake it gets very complicated. I think we did a great job this month, and I'm sure we will do a great job this term. When we graduate Seo2 Elementary School, I hope we have good memories of SBC. Students have listened and participated in our broadcast since it started on May 22nd 2013. I am very thankful. I believe that students will have an awesome school life with SBC. Thank you again and have a great day!