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Written by Katherine

Chapter 3#

The small star disappeared soon when after Mr. Dempter put it above the cave. When After the big star in the cube spins spun very fast and go went inside the cave, Mr. Depter and Rella goes went inside the cave too. But the cave was short shallow. There was nothing inside it.

Rella : Um.......Mr. Dempter, there's nothing. (make sure you use proper punctuation for quotes.  Rella said, "Um.")

Mr. Dempter : (Whispering)Wait. Don't say a word.

Rella wanted to ask so many things, but so coudn't. Mr. Dempter pointed to/at the ceiling.

Mr. Dempter : (Whispering)Look at that quickly.

Rella looked at the cave ceiling. There was a huge star! Soon the wind blows blew (keep your narrative in the past tense, not present) into the cave. The wind was so fast and strong. Something felt strange. The star iswas getting bigger! Or we were going up.

Rella : Something is weird; the star is getting bigger....

Mr. Dempter : No, it isn't.

Rella : Then......are we going up?

Mr. Depmter : Yes, we are.

Rella : What! We're.... we're go.....going up?

Mr. Dempter : Yes.

The star on the ceiling is almost hit Mr. Dempter.

Rella : Watch out!

But Mr. Dempter didn't move. Rella thought soon he will hit the ceiling. However, Mr. Dempter get went through the star. Rella get went through the star too. It was like an elevator(in the cave). Finally they stopped going up. Rella looked around. There was nothing. Only a cube and a star inside it. This cube is the cube that Rella saw before. The cube came closer in front of Mr. Dempter's feet. I mean fin. (remind me to talk to you about this in class) Mr. Dempter and Rella get went through the cube. And they sat down on the star.

Mr. Dempter : Hang on!

Rella : What?

Before Mr. Dempter answered, the cube exploded! Rella thought that she would die so she closed her eyes. When she opened her eyes, the star was going up.

Mr. Dempter : I hate these!

Rella didn't know what's happening. Suddenly, the star goes went down very quickly! It was like a roller-coaster! And Rella hated roller-coasters. It spinned twice, and then went go up and down.

Rella and Mr. Dempter : Ah!Ahhh!

Up and down, and into a triple spin.

Zzzunk!

Finally, it stopped. Rella was so dizzy. She almost throw threw up! So she looked at the star closer.

A label on it said, 'Star-coaster'

Mr. Dempter : It was terrible. Now let's go.

They swimmed about 10 minutes. They go went right and turned left, go went around. Finally, they arrived. There was another cave. They go went inside the cave. The cave was very deep and difficult. Rella coudn't remember it. Mr. Dempter stopped somewhere and knocked 2(REMEMBER YOUR SPACES)times. And whisper 4 words. And Mr. Dempter hold held Rella's hand and get went through the cave wall. The room wasn't a cave; it was a palace. It was very large.

Mr. Dempter : Michael Theodore Dempter here with Rella........

Rella : (whispering quickly)Beatris Shults.

Mr. Dempter : Rella Beatris Shults. Beatrice?

"You finally came. Mr. Dempter."--who is saying this? just a voice? then you have to say, From nowhere a voice said:

This voice was the voice that who lead Rella to the rainbow dolphin.

Rella :(Whispering to Mr. Dempter) That voice! That voice! I know that voice!

Mr. Dempter : (Whispering) What are you talking about? You heard him?

"Now come here," the voice said.

Rella tried to explain.

Mr. Dempter : Not now.

Rella and Mr. Dempter goes went down the stairs. And they goes went inside the fifth room.

screech -- please put this into a sentence with proper punctuation: They heard a loud screech.

"Welcome Ms. Shults," the voice said.

What will happen? Find out in Chapter 4#