The reason I want to go the dead sea
1. I never went to the dead sea before
2. I heard that it's easy to swim at the dead sea
3. I want to taste the dead sea and check that it is real salty or not
4. I want to lay down at the dead sea and read a book (I saw a lot of picture of that)
5. Because the sea name is 'The Dead Sea'
6. I want to put a heavy thing at the dead sea and check that it can really float
7. Because I like playing at the sea
8. At a picture of the dead sea, the water looks so clean
Jinny, These are all good points. Well done. Please make the following corrections and put them in your glog.
The reason I want to go the dead sea (capitalize Dead Sea please)
1. I never went to the dead sea before
2. I heard that it's easy to swim at in the dead sea
3. I want to taste the dead sea and check to see that it is really salty or not
4. I want to lay down at in the dead sea and read a book (I saw a lot of pictures of that)
5. Because the sea's name is 'The Dead Sea'
6. I want to put a heavy thing at in the dead sea and check that it can really float
7. Because I like playing at the sea
8. at In a picture of the dead sea, the water looks so clean