This is my story! It's not finished! I wish you will like it!
Tittle : Dolphins story
Once upon a time, there were three dolphins named Katherine, Jinny, Carrie. They were all friends. Carrie was very good at swimming, but Jinny wasn't. Katherine was good too, but not as Carrie. Now, they are above the water. Lets listen to their conversation.
Jinny : Oh! It's too hard to swim. I'm really tired now. How about you guys?
Carrie : You are tired? Already? I want to swim more!
Katherine : I want to swim more too. Jinny, I think you can't play with us. Me and Carrie are good at swimming. But not you!
Carrie and Katherine : You are a loser! You are a loser! Go away! We don't like you!
Jinny was so sad. So she just swim away. Jinny swim so far. So she can't see ger friends.
Jinny : Why am I so stupid! Oh! I hate swimming.
Back to Katherine and Carrie. They were going underwater and having a swim race.
Carrie : Yeah! I'm the winner!
Katherine : Congratulation! Oh! I'm so happy because Jinny's gone.
Carrie : Me too. Do you want to jump to the air? There is no stupid Jinny so we can jump.
Katherine : Good idea. But don't tease me. I'm not very good at jumping.
Carrie : Let's go!
Katherine and Carrie were jumping very beautifully. But......... Oh! No! The people who put dolphins in to the aquarium saw them jumping beautifully and said.
Person 1 : Hey! Look at those things! How about puting them into the aquarium? People will love them because they are good at jumping!
Person 2 : Good idea! Let's go catch them!
People went beside Carrie and Katherine. And then........ Catch them!
Katherine and Carrie : Oh! No! Jinny! Help!
But Jinny was so far, So she can't hear them. At the same time Jinny was praying.
Jinny : Oh! God! Please make me into a person! Oh! God!
Suddenly, there was a big noise!
Wirg~~Pop!
Oh! Jinny turned into a person Jinny shouted,
Jinny : Thank you! Thank you so much!
Wow! Now she can speak English too! So Jinny lived happily for a long time with being a person. But one day, she heard that we can see dolphins at a aquarium. She hated the aquarium but she really wanted to see a dolphin. So she decided to go to a aquarium. So was looking around.
Jinny : Oh! It's so beautiful. Where's the dolphins? Umm........ Oh! Here!
Jinny can still understand and say dolphin words.
Jinny started to say dolphin words.
Jinny : Hello! What's your name? Oh! No!
She shouted. Because she realized that the dolphins were Carrie and Katherine!
What will happen? Nobody know......
You have the beginning of a great story here. I loved the tension. Haha -- Carrie and Katherine are so mean though!! I hope you don't have anybody mean like that to you in real life. :D Carrie
Tittle : Dolphin's story
Once upon a time, there were three dolphins named Katherine, Jinny, and Carrie. They were all friends. Carrie was very good at swimming, but Jinny wasn't. Katherine was good too, but not as much as Carrie. Now, they are above the water. Let's listen to their conversation.
Jinny : Oh! It's too hard to swim. I'm really tired now. How about you guys?
Carrie : You are tired? Already? I want to swim more!
Katherine : I want to swim more too. Jinny, I think you can't play with us. Me and Carrie are good at swimming. But not you!
Carrie and Katherine : You are a loser! You are a loser! Go away! We don't like you!
Jinny was so sad. So she just swam away. Jinny swam so far. So she can't see her friends.
Jinny : Why am I so stupid! Oh! I hate swimming.
Back to Katherine and Carrie. They were going underwater and having a swimming race.
Carrie : Yeah! I'm the winner!
Katherine : Congratulations! Oh! I'm so happy because Jinny's gone.
Carrie : Me too. Do you want to jump to the air? There is no stupid Jinny so we can jump.
Katherine : Good idea. But don't tease me. I'm not very good at jumping.
Carrie : Let's go!
Katherine and Carrie were jumping very beautifully. But......... Oh! No! The people who put dolphins in to the aquarium saw them jumping beautifully and said.
Person 1 : Hey! Look at those things! How about putting them into the aquarium? People will love them because they are good at jumping!
Person 2 : Good idea! Let's go catch them!
People went beside Carrie and Katherine. And then........ Catchught them!
Katherine and Carrie : Oh! No! Jinny! Help!
But Jinny was so far, So she can't hear them. At the same time Jinny was praying.
Jinny : Oh! God! Please make me into a person! Oh! God!
Suddenly, there was a big noise!
Wirg~~Pop!
Oh! Jinny turned into a person. Jinny shouted,
Jinny : Thank you! Thank you so much!
Wow! Now she can speak English too! So Jinny lived happily for a long time with being a person. But one day, she heard that we can see dolphins at an aquarium. She hated the aquarium but she really wanted to see a dolphin. So she decided to go to an aquarium. So she was looking around.
Jinny : Oh! It's so beautiful. Where's the dolphins? Umm........ Oh! Here!
Jinny can still understand and say dolphin words.
Jinny started to say dolphin words.
Jinny : Hello! What's your name? Oh! No!
She shouted. Because she realized that the dolphins were Carrie and Katherine!
What will happen? Nobody knows......