Thank you for writing about your five different dreams, Yelim! I like how you chose to write about each type of dream that we discussed. I know we went over them in class, but in case you want to make the written corrections, here are a few notes:
-whem= when (but I think that was just a typo)
-Instead of "I don't have a dream of beautiful story" it would be better to say "I don't have dreams of beautiful stories."
-When you are talking about dreams you have for jobs in the future, you should write that it is a dream of "being" or "becoming" that profession (e.g. "I used to have a dream of becoming a doctor" and "I had a dream of being a swimmer"
Thanks for posting your assignment! See you next week!
Thank you for writing about your five different dreams, Yelim! I like how you chose to write about each type of dream that we discussed. I know we went over them in class, but in case you want to make the written corrections, here are a few notes:
-whem= when (but I think that was just a typo)
-Instead of "I don't have a dream of beautiful story" it would be better to say "I don't have dreams of beautiful stories."
-When you are talking about dreams you have for jobs in the future, you should write that it is a dream of "being" or "becoming" that profession (e.g. "I used to have a dream of becoming a doctor" and "I had a dream of being a swimmer"
Thanks for posting your assignment! See you next week!
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