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    Last summer, I went to a Shinee concert. My mom came with me, and I was very happy. She drove us for 30 minutes to get to Olympic park. I also saw Kara, Brown Eyed Girls, and Girl's Generation. It was very fun, but in the concert it was very noisy and powerful. I could feel my body pulsing from the bass. I bought a Girl's Generation sticker that I still have. I also got to shake hands with Girl's Generation. I like Shinee's song Ring Ding Dong which they performed that night. It was very good.  The singers were happy and in high spirits.  They were so excited that their sound was grand.  On the stage there were electric lights. I don't remember what the lights read, but maybe it was the names of the groups. It was very fun; I was still excited for many days after it was over. When I went to school, I told all of my friends about it.

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Teacher: Megan