LOWRIE's BOARD
WEEK of 1/25
Homework: Please write 4-5 sentences using the email vocabulary on page 74-75. Look at the pages to help with sentence structure and grammar. First write in past tense (opened, sent, forwarded) then write the sentences again in present tense (open, send, forward) if you have time (if not we will do this together in class :).
EXAMPLE (in past tense) Yesterday I opened up my email account. I entered the password and checked the new messages in my inbox. I received a memo from my boss for my department. I forwarded the message to my colleagues and closed my inbox.
EXAMPLE (in present tense) I come into the office and open my email account. I enter my password and check the new messages in my inbox. I receive a memo from my boss for my department. I forward the message to my colleagues and close my inbox.
WEEK of 1/16
Homework: Please write a short paragraph (4 or 5 sentences) about a visit to see someone (example: mother/father, brother, friend, co-worker). Who was there? Did you return to your hometown? What did you do (eat a meal or drink, take a walk, play a game)? How did you feel? What did they say? Use your book (page 8 "The Visit," page 11 "Family," etc.) for useful vocabulary or phrases. Please be careful about the verb tense or form (present, past, future) (example: go, went, will go) pick one tense and use it in the every sentence.
EXAMPLE (in past tense): Last weekend I went to my hometown to visit my mother. My sister was home and we made a delicious dinner together. After dinner we took a walk. I felt very happy. When I left I said "Thank you for inviting me" and my mom said "It was our pleasure!"
JANUARY
Vocabulary
hometown: place where you grew up (place where you lived as a child)
department: a part of a company (example: sales, customer service, customer service)
occupations: jobs or professions (example: doctor, lawyer, engineer)
position: a job or job title (example: CEO, manager, receptionist)
euphemism: polite or indirect way of something (example: “passed away”)
mother in law: the mother of your wife/husband
nephew: the son of your sister/brother
niece: the daughter of your sister/brother
brunette: person with brown hair
blonde: person with golden or yellow hair
cafeteria: a large place for eating found in a mall, hostpital, school, or large office building
receipt: a list of things paid for and their total price
facial features: parts of the face (example: nose, mouth, eyes)
stub: the small piece of paper left (as a receipt) after an usher takes your ticket
active: in action;
characterized by energetic work,participation, etc.; busy: an active
life
passive: not
active, not participating
great aunt: your
mother or father’s aunt
great uncle:
your mother or father’s uncle
non-toxic: not poisonous
mirage: a visual illusion (especially in the desert or at
sea) that has no substance or reality
Expressions/Phrases
“What do you do?”: what is your job
passed away: a polite way of saying someone died
job security: feeling stable in your employment, not being worried about employment
morning person: someone who likes the morning and getting up early
night owl: someone who likes to stay awake late at night
Homework
Yesterday, I went to seoul to meet my friends. Because last Sun. is my 33th birthday. Three friends of mine, get together and we made a steminaful dinner with some beer and wine and after dinner, we went to billiard room for play billiard three-cushion game. I felt very happy because I won the game by fluke-shoot. When I left my friends said "You are so lucky today. Happy birthday to u." and I replied "I hope that next time god of fluke bless for u"
Ps : YJM is Jimmy.
First of all thank you so much for doing this homework. The sentences are very complex and well written. Great Work!
Copy with comments:
Yesterday, I went to seoul to meet my friends. Because last Sun. is my 33th birthday. Three friends of mine, get together and we made a steminaful dinner with some beer and wine(add period) and after dinner, we went to a billiard room for play a billiard three-cushion game. I felt very happy because I won the game by fluke-shoot. When I left my friends said "You are so lucky today. Happy birthday to u." and I replied "I hope that next time the god of fluke bless for u"
red words and punctuation: delete
(,) (,) (and) (for) we usually do not begin a sentence with because (because)
green words: capitalize
places (Seoul) the first word of a new sentence (Last Sunday was my 33rd birthday.) (wine. After)
teal words and punctuation: add word/punctuation
good place to end the sentence (with some beer and wine.) you need an article before a regular noun (went to a billiard room) and (to play a three-cushion game) (next time the god of fluke) *
orange words: tense/form change
is (past) = was
get (past) = got
bless (subject is singular and not I, you, or we--so add an -es) = god (he/she) blesses
blue words: change word
for--> to we went to play billiards
u-->you
33th-->33rd (rd after 3, d after 2= third and second)
*examples of articles are italicized here (the, an, a)
Yesterday I went to Seoul to meet my friends. Last Sunday was my 33rd birthday. Three friends of mine got together and we made a steminaful dinner with some beer and wine. After dinner we went to a billiard room to play a billiard three-cushion game. I felt very happy because I won the game by fluke-shoot. When I left my friends said "You are so lucky today. Happy birthday to you." and I replied "I hope that next time god of fluke blesses you."
OMG;;; I see this post just now T_T becoz yesterday is my birthday, so I've been felt so tight schedule on last weekend. Just 20 mins. left;;; I'll be my best!!! C U soon~!