Hey Daisy,

Very well done.  A few minor mistakes.  I judged your work a little harshly because of your advanced level in writing.  Some of my changes were stylistic and not for grammar.  For example, I took out "clothes'" for "clothes' style" although it is grammatically correct.  As well, I changed "too" to "as well" for stylistic reasons.

Why are you sorry to post your assignment??? You did a very good job!  Below are my corrections.

Carrie

I am usually inclined to wear comfortable clothes to dress up.

Most of my clothes are made of cotton and somethings (did you mean "sometimes"?)consist of wool for warmth.

Most clothes have a dark color, especially black or navy and they look really comfortable like training clothes.

The last time I wore this was yesterday to go to the gym for swimming.

Most of my friends notice my clothes' (just style is fine) style because they also have similar tastes of  in clothes. However, they do not want me and themselves to wear these the same kinds of clothes' type as them and also try to change their type style too as well.

Ohhh~! thank you for your revising. My writing looks more stylistic due to you. Nowadays, I am really motivated in speaking english because of your help. Thank you very much and see you next monday. I will not be late on that day *^^* !