Jin- Thank you for telling me about your favorite artist, Picasso! I like how you are honest about your first impression of his paintings and then how you felt about them later on. I love your use of the expression "caught my eye", what a great way to explain how his paintings attracted you. Keep in mind that when you say a person is attractive, it means you think the person is handsome or beautiful. So when you want to say his paintings are beautiful, make sure to specify you are talking about the paintings and not the person. Also, remember when talking about the past, such as what you thought about Picasso's paintings when you first saw them, make sure to use past tense. I copied your paragraph with some corrections highlighted below:

Pablo Picasso is one of the greatest and most famous painters in the world. I think he is really attractive. I mean his paintings caught my eye. When I saw his paintings for the first time, I thought they were really strange.  Most of Picasso's paintings look like monsters, they are not usual. So I didn't like them. But they are more charming than other common paintings because of their strangeness. Later I liked his more than others. 

Thanks Jin! See you next week!