My favorite food is chicken.
I liked fry chiken, also I like spicy fry chicken too.
I lie the chicken because of the chicken's crunch.
I never cooked chicken, but I think I can cook chicken.
But you must not eat chicken a lot, especially at night.
Because if you will get fat.
Yelim,
Thank you for writing about your favorite food! The correct term is "fried chicken", instead of "fry" chicken. Also, the last sentence is missing two words. "Because if *you do* you will get fat. " Other then that, you're sentences are great. I like how you talk about the "chicken's crunch". When you talk abut the consistency (the way the food feels) we call it the "texture". The texture of the fried chicken is crunchy- so you could say "I like the crunchy texture of the chicken", as an alternative.
Nice job! You are doing great with the new book :) I am very impressed.
-Phoebe